finally i'm done. julian was right. your skills (or lack thereof) will limit your capacity to communication. here are my final drafts for my first assignment.
design 1 - the runner
i chose this design for its simplicity and unique use of the running man. like one of my classmates said during the critique, this probably will not work for any other name.
the tracing seems very rough, and the color shading is really rather poorly done as well. although i wanted to convey simplicity, i am thoroughly dissatisfied with the colors. will look into improving the colors, and the shadows. i dont think i will be adding a background to this piece.
design 2 - knights and dragon
i chose this design because i liked the dragon and knight. i was pretty pleased with the knight and force field, however i do not like the dragon. i also feel that the castle is lacking detail, all 3 areas i would be improving upon.
however, the most important flaw was obvious when i printed out my work. the force field becomes rather unobvious, and the old could hardly be made out. i think i might try to add some effects on the back side of the force field, and make it slightly more obvious.
please give me comments!
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